Thursday, November 5, 2015

Mandatory Draft- IMRaD

Abstract
            The relationship between academic workload and academic performance for college freshman can be important for incoming college students to understand when making decision on class loads.  To look into this, a survey was given out to 20 University of Iowa freshman.  This survey asked them to answer reveal their workloads, stress level, and academic performance.  It was found that an increase in academic workload is correlated with an increase in the level of stress experienced by the college student.  It was also found that increased stress can be associated with worse academic performance.  This might sway students from trying to load up on courses, and entice them to be careful with the amount of academic work they take on at one time.
Introduction
            College has always been known to be some of the best times of someone’s life, but also some of the most stressful.  Many studies cover the effects of partying and health on GPA, but not many studies have taken a look at the stress of college students.  Stress can have a major role in the well being in someone’s life and success in school. Because of this it is important to understand how class and studying workload affects a student’s stress level.  It also is important to know how this stress can affect performance.
            In a study performed in 2008, by the University of Minnesota, it was found that stress is the factor that has the biggest effect on the GPA’s of students in college (Marcotty).  It is known that stress is a huge factor in academic performance; however there are many different sources of stress for college students, especially freshman.  There is a gap in this research because it is still unknown what things people can control that will allow them to be less stressful and more successful.  A factor that plays a large role in the stress of many college students is the workload of class and studying.  But no one has looked into how the work that is put in and required for classes can affect the stress, and eventually the grades, of students.
            To fill this gap in knowledge, a new study surveyed 20 college freshmen at the University of Iowa.  In this survey they were asked about their workload in the classroom and time spent studying or doing homework, along with how they rated their stress level and their academic performance.  This new research will give an insight to the relationship between the workload in hours spent on school to the academic performance.
Methods
Participants:
            20 college students from the University of Iowa participated in this study.  All of these students were freshmen.
Data Sources & Procedures:
            The data was collected by handing out surveys on paper.  Surveys were anonymous and required students to input their semester hours and how many hours, on average, they spent studying in a week per semester hour.  Also, students were asked to rate their stress level and academic performance on a scale provided in each question.
Data Analysis:
            To gain the conclusions from this, the data was analyzed for the correlation between the work load and stress levels of the University of Iowa freshmen.  The number of hours spent in class was compared to the stress level.  The number of hours spent studying per week was compared to the stress level of the students.  Also, the total number of hours on academics (time in class + time spent studying/on homework) was analyzed with the stress levels of students.
Results
            Graph 1 indicates that the amount of time spent on academics each week can have an impact on the stress levels of college freshmen.  As seen in the bar graph, the stress level reported by students increases from little stress to moderate to very stressed. With every increase in the workload, the stress level increases as well.  The time a college academic workload consumes every week seems to be correlated to the amount of stress that college freshmen feel.  This connects workloads to stress felt by college freshmen.
Graph 1: The average academic workload per week for all the students in each of the stress level choices.

            Table 1 indicates the academic performance, on average, of the students in each level of stress. The average grade performance shows that lower stress is correlated with a higher academic performance.  The researchers did this by assigning a number to each grade level.  Students ranked their academic performance as A, B, C, D, F.  The researchers assigned 4 points to A, 3 points to B, 2 points to C, etc.  The freshmen who reported being very stressed only had a 2 point average (C average). The freshmen with little stress reported a 3.53 average, which is between an A- and a B+ average. This can explain the relationship between the effects of stress on academic performance.  Through stress, the connection between workload and academic performance can be drawn.
Table 1: Displays the average grade received by students that report each of the stress levels.
                   Avg. Grade
little stress (n=7)
3.528571429
moderate stress (n=11)
3.363636364
very stressed (n=2)
2

Discussion
            The results of this study tend to resemble the results from the University of Minnesota.  Much like in the previous study, it is shown one again that stress has an impact on the academic performance of college students, and specifically freshman as this new study shows.  Also, this study shows the connection between workload and academic performance.  It is able to show this connection, by showing how an increased workload can increase stress, and this stress in turn can impact a person’s academic performance.
            One potential problem in this study is that this study does not record or acknowledge any other factors that could lead t stress.  Academic workload is not the only thing that can lead to an increased stress.  To try and compensate for this, the survey is taken from a relatively large sample.  This will help because many different people will have many things going on but the one thing known to be the same is the stress level.  And by taking the average workload, it is hoped that any reasons other than workload would not show through in the data.  However, the data could be affected by these outside stress factors.

            The implications of these findings are for college freshman and I believe could be applied to all college students.  By increasing workload in academics, on can create more stress for oneself.  This can impact many areas not focused on in this study, but importantly, as pointed out by the data, it can impact academic performance.  This information will help college freshman consider how many semester hours they wish to take, knowing that more semester hours leads to a larger workload, which is correlated to worse academic performance.

3 comments:

  1. 1. This paper flowed real well. Just a couple grammatical errors and typos that can easily be fixed by reading over the paper.
    2. A) Try to avoid using I as much as you can for instance, the last paragraph of your paper you used I when it wasn't exactly necessary.
    B. Patterns errors are to a minimum.
    C. Very long and descriptive but lacks an appendix, which can easily be fixed. But does follow APA citations.
    3. A. Once you read over your paper you will have a more concise paper. Try to focus more on eliminating words.
    B. Provide a little more in your abstract in regards to major information.
    C. The introduction was very well written and very precise. The gap is clearly stated and easily understandable.
    D. very clear headings and well written.
    E. The results section could be a little more in depth. In regards to your graphs, having them a part of your paper will clearly help the reader engage in your reading.
    F. The discussion is probably your strongest part of the paper.

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  2. Your introduction does do a good job of introducing what the study was about. There are however a few things that you need to fix. First off, re-read the paragraphs and check for grammar mistakes because there were quite a few. Also, try to write more concisely because you tend to say things more than one just in a different way. Lastly, do not include how many people were in your survey and who they were, that should go in your methods section under participants. The introduction is just made to introduce what the study was about.
    You also need to put in an abstract to this paper. An abstract is made so that if the reader were not to read anything but the abstract, they could know what the test was about, the data that was found, and the outcome of the study. Having this is a key part to an IMRaD paper.
    The results section does summarize the data in an understandable way but make sure to put the graphs before the paragraph so that the reader can refer to them. Try to incorporate some more of the data into the results so that if the reader weren't even looking at the data they would be able to understand what the data was.
    Add a discussion section. This is where you say what you could have changed in the experiment. This is also where you summarize the outcome that you found from the study.You then should go into what future studies could be done and what that might change about this field of study or topic that you are talking about.
    Overall the paper has many good points to it, just make sure to have all of the major parts of the IMRaD style essay.

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  3. Overall, I thought this was a very well done paper. it was vey organized, free flowing, and had pretty good transition sentences. The graph's were very nice and the quote grabbed my attention.

    Some things for improvement though could be the condensation of the introduction. In addition to this I did not see the first graph on the blogger. This was probably just an error in the blogger format though. Along with this you used the word "I" in the conclusion. I think you only did it once, but try to avoid that. Lastly the last sentence in your conclusion is a little lengthy and continues on a little too long. Try to break that up



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