Tuesday, September 15, 2015

Mandatory Draft- IR

Introduction
                  Communication is the key to the success of every person.  Whether that is communicating with your parents about a, communicating with your friends about plans for this weekend, or communicating with your teachers. The best way to be successful in your goal as a person is to communicate effectively with the people around you.  This is done through effective communication. Effective communication however, can be different for different people and groups.  Clearly, people will communicate in different ways depending on the group they are communication with.  One of the main ways we communicate now is through writing, whether that is an email to a teacher, a quick text to a friend to tell them you are running late, or even a paper that will communicate your knowledge on a topic in school.
I was interested in what ways the profession that I want to go in to uses writing, and how the different types of writing are utilized by professionals in the accounting and finance fields. Through my research I have found this variation to be the same in the accounting and finance professional fields.  These professions, although do a lot of work independently, require communication with not only other people in the same fields but also the communication form other fields to achieve their goals.  There are many different genres of writing that are vital to being able to complete the work required in these professions.  Academic and non-academic writings play a significant role in the accounting and finance professions.  There are numerous different types of writing, all depending on the audience and the purpose of the writing. In an interview with Mrs. Burke, CFO of a local bank and a former accountant, emphasized, “In my present role and in all my past roles, writing is a part of every day”.

Academic Writings
Academic writing is very important when communicating with other professionals in accounting and finance.  Mrs. Burke says, “I don’t deal with academic articles directly in my position, but they can have an impact on the way we do business”.  Often they are new findings that one professional has discovered and wants to communicate that with all the other professional in the field.  With almost all of the academic writings in the fields of accounting and finance there is some use of graphs, charts, or tables to communicate information efficiently.  One thing that is commonly in academic articles is proposed problem and solutions in the accounting and finance systems.
One problem brought up is the problem of how to calculate human capital and put that into a financial statement.  The purpose of an article like this is to inform his fellow people in the accounting and finance fields and, more importantly, to help bring a possible solution to the problem.  These types of articles often have more of a persuasive stance and can use more influential language.  This can be seen in “Finance and Accounting’s Glaring Omission” by Tom Pryor, the author of five books, teaches at several universities, and is on the board of the Journal of Corporate Accounting & Finance.  He states in the article, “The Human Capital Asset Statement proposed by the Human Capital Management Institute focuses on the value added by employees. I propose a human capital valuation method that encompasses education, accomplishments, and character.” (Pryor, 2015, 61-64).  He states the solution that has been proposed before, but he disagrees with solution by proposing a different angle of valuing employees in a company.  Another article discussing the role of accounting and finance in adverse selection.  Much like the article by Pryor, the article “Accounting, Finance and Adverse Selection: Illustrations and Applications” by Young, uses holds an opinion throughout the article in order to make the point that the author wants to make (Young, 2011, 69-101).
Another dynamic of academic writing is in informative and informational articles.  These articles usual have found some new formula, or statistic that can be used for the betterment of the whole entire field.  Using a serious and informative stance, these articles go into great detail into how this new discovered formula works and the process they took to get this formula.   The integration of a formula into a paragraph is not uncommon and is used to increase understanding of the intended audience, other professionals that could be utilizing this formula in their work. A team of researchers were studying the business cycle and how they could create a formula to create a quantitative model to economic fluctuations. In the article “Business Cycle Accounting”, the authors Chari, Kehoe, and McGrattan uses many different calculation and text explanations paired with charts and graphs to communicate the findings of the team.  Chari uses this combination of text and equations effectively for the audience, “Here T(st) is lump-sum transfers. The initial condition b(s0) is given. Each of the bonds b(st+1) is a claim to one unit of consumption instate st+1 and costs q(st+1|st) dollars in state st. The first-order conditions for the consumer can be written as −Ul(st)/Uc(st)= w(st)” (Chari, 2007, 831).  The authors use this type of writing here because the intended audience, other researchers and professionals can use this information. 
Non-Academic Writings
                  The most common form of writing in the accounting and finance professions is non-academic writing.  A balance sheet is one form of non academic writing that is used very commonly among the accounting field. A balance sheet is broken up into two sides, assets and liabilities.  The message being communicated in a balance sheet is just a quick summary in numerical form of where the company stands.  Using categories and placing a number value next to those categories, like in this line of a balance sheet, “Short-term Investments: $5,003” (2004).  This effectively communicates the information to the people that need it by keeping it short and direct.  Expense forms, like the balance sheet, use a direct method of communication.  An example of this can be seen in this balance sheet line, “Current Balance: $8,899.00” (SURC Accounting, 2004). The expense form displays a dollar value, but for a specific transaction.  Communication on an expense form differs slightly from an expense form because it includes signatures of the person submitting the form, the date of the transaction, and other details about the transaction. This grouped and direct form is exactly what Mrs. Burke refers to when she said, “One of the keys to effective business writing is understanding the message that needs to be communicated”.  The message portrayed by these documents do not need a long explanation, they merely need the dollar amounts with limited other information.
                  Another form of non-academic writing that is often used by businesses is the memorandum, or memo.  A memo is a short written note, often used as a reminder.  This reminder typically uses short paragraph form or bullet points.  The important part of making a memo successful is, “Understanding who the audience to whom I am communicating” (Brizee & Perkins, 2011).  How the memo will be formatted and what things will be stated in the memo all depend on who it is intended for. 
Conclusion
                  After researching many academic and non-academic sources along with an interview of a professional in the field I have found how vital utilizing many different types of writing can be in the business field. “Knowing that my writing is not only a reflection of me,” said Mrs. Burke, “but a reflection on executive officers in the company, therefore a reflection on my position and the company”.   Academic writing may be less common, however the things found in academic writing may be the some of the most vital writing to the accounting and finance professions.  Most of the communication that happens in the field is classified as non-academic and these types of writing are important because they are used every day on the job.  Clearly, writing is very important in the accounting and finance professional fields.



References
Brizee, A., & Perkins, C., (2011). Sample Memo. Retrieved from        https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/590/04/
Jagannathan, MuraliView, Schwartz, Steven, Spizman, Joshua, Young, Richard. (2011).            Accounting, Finance and Adverse Selection: Illustrations and Applications. Journal of   Accounting Literature, 30. Retrieved from                http://search.proquest.com.proxy.lib.uiowa.edu/docview/1356642860?OpenUrlRefId      nfo:xri/sid:primo
Pryor, Tom. (2015). Finance and Accounting's Glaring Omission. Journal of Corporate            Accounting & Finance, 26. Retrieved from                  http://onlinelibrary.wiley.com.proxy.lib.uiowa.edu/doi/10.1002/jcaf.22081/full
Springfield Psychological Services. (2004). Balance Sheets. Retrieved from  http://www.apapracticecentral.org/business/finances/balance-sheet-sample.pdf
SURC Accounting. (2014). Expense Forms. Retrieved from http://www.cwu.edu/surc          accounting/expense-forms

V. V. Chari, Kehoe, Patrick J., & McGrattan, Ellen R. (2007). Business Cycle Counting. Journal of            Econometric Society, 75. Retrieved from                  http://onlinelibrary.wiley.com.proxy.lib.uiowa.edu/doi/10.1111/j.1468  0262.2007.00768.x/epdf

2 comments:

  1. During my first read of your paper, I thought the flow of the paper was good. I thought the separation of your paper into academic and non-academic was very helpful, and helped the paper move along overall. I think your thesis is not very clear. I think it could be the last sentence in your first paragraph, or the last sentence in your second paragraph. If it is the last sentence in your first paragraph I would try and include the use of the words "academic and non-academic writing". If it is the last sentence in your second paragraph I would maybe add one more sentence on describing or explaining the quote that you used. I think overall your introduction is good. You explain how writing is important in the field you are interested in. One thing I would suggest is to include what you researched to find the information you are about to tell us!
    Your section for academic writings is organized well. I think the paragraphs are focused and do not include too many topics. I think you explain the different types of academic articles clearly. One thing I would recommend is to explain your quotations a little bit more. I think the introductions to the quotations are very good. You give a background of the author and what they have accomplished which is very helpful. I just think a some points, like in your last paragraph in this section you could explain your quotation a little bit farther. I also think you could talk more about the format of these academic articles!
    I think your section for non-academic writings could be developed a little more. I think you should separate all your examples of academic writing into different paragraphs, and go into more depth for each of them. You would write about the format or tone of voice of the non-academic articles. I think your general ideas are good, and your quotations are pretty good. I believe in the first paragraph of non-academic writings there is one quotation that needs more information in the in-text citation. I also think that your paragraph about memos could be developed more. It is pretty short.
    Overall, I think you have really good ideas in your paper. I think the biggest recommendation I would make is to more clearly state your thesis in one of your two introduction paragraphs. If you just added something about academic and non-academic writings into the last sentence of your first paragraph, that could be your thesis statement. From there, make sure that the beginning of each paragraph relates back to the thesis. I think as of now, not all your introduction sentences do because your thesis is not totally clear. I think all of your introduction sentences in all the paragraphs are good if you add in something about academic-and non-academic writings to your thesis.
    You use a lot of good quotations in your paper, and you are very good at introducing them. You also have a good amount of examples of different types of writing involved in accounting which I think is very helpful to the readers to learn about multiple types of writing. I also really liked your first paragraph of the introduction. I think it is able to grab the attention of the readers, and not bore the audience in the first paragraph!

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  2. I think that overall the paper was solid. The paper was well organized and flowed very well. I thought you used quotations very well and the person you interviewed was very qualified.
    I think that one of the main improvements that can be made are centered on the first page. The first paragraph was a good hook, but I would try to use other words besides communicate. Nearly every sentence used that word. I think some other words that could be used are "interact", "tell", "inform" etc. I think that if you just replaced a few of those words in the first paragraph the paper would be much better.
    Another thing I think could be improved is in the second paragraph. I recognized the thesis statement as, "Academic and non-academic writing play a significant role in the accounting and finance professions." If that is your thesis statement I would recommend moving it to the last sentence of the paragraph to help the paper flow better and to give yourself a good transition into the body paragraphs.
    I think that another thing that would improve this paper are better transitions. One example is near the bottom of page 4 I think a better transition could be used before you start talking about non-academic writings. I think that something you could say would be "Although academic writings are a significant part of this field, non-academic writings are much more prominent." I think adding something like this there would help it flow better.
    Overall, I did think that this was a good paper. I think that outside of the things I listed above, overall conventions can be improved. Outside of that it was a well written paper. It was informative and provided good evidence from the sources.

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